Broken Wings

Quote: It definitely wasn’t the grime we had last night. Grime was a basic food for slaves and peasants like me. You have ‘grime’ two times. I know, I wasn't ...

I didn't draw the cats, I got the line art from google. But they are adorable, aren't they? ^-^ Thanks ANI, Phorcys

Yeah, I was thinking that too, but I have no idea how to explain her...I'm not even sure what she looks like all that much, because I wrote it in ...

Chapter One/ Part two finally finished! I was surprised when I found myself waking up to a gentle, rocking feeling. I was leaning on the stallion’s neck, my arms draped ...

Yeah...^-^ I play the flute, and it always seems to be a 'magical instrument' in stories and stuff. I dunno...I just like it. Besides, I can't draw any other instrument ...

Sketches? My characters don't seem flat? I take that many different ways. Flat, as in 2d forms or whatever, unemotional, not enough color, ect...? Please explain that a bit more ...

What's up with the candles on their heads? xD

Warning: Do not steal any of my artwork, even though it sucks. 1. This was a sketch that I decided to do on Photoshop and make it colorful and pretty. ...

It is a very sweet poem, but it's a little dry. It could be very colorful and interesting, if you used a bigger vocabulary and maybe make the sentences a ...

Okay, I lied. This is Chapter One/ Part One. I fixed it up a bit and made it longer. Don't worry, I don't think Part two will be as long. ...

Yes, dragons will come soon. And thank you for your comments...Eleinasari, I don't see how that sentence is unclear, but I'll try to change it. I'm also sorry for my ...

That was so sweet and romantic! I think I've read five times before I've posted this! I just love the ending, how it's almost like a cliffhanger but not and ...

xD She was just talking to the tree because it listened and no one else wanted to. And yes, the dance thing is something from my own experience. I don't ...

My cousin would love this story, I think. I need to get her on this site. Well, I really can't find any flaws. That's a first. May I ask why? ...

Awww. :( This had the potential to be utterly corny, but it wasn't. I liked how the memories were described both as they actually were, and with the layers that ...